Set III, 10
PARALLEL STRUCTURE
EXPRESS SIMILAR IDEAS IN SIMILAR GRAMMATICAL FORM
NOT parallel: Jane is tall, blonde, and
with blue eyes. Parallel: Jane is tall, blonde, and
blue-eyed.
Use similar grammatical form for:
1. Items in a series:
- NOT parallel: In spincasting, your stance, how you hold
the rod, and the way in which you swing
may affect distance and accuracy.
- Parallel: In
spincasting, your stance, your manner
of holding the rod, and your swing may
affect distance and accuracy.
-
NOT parallel: He asked me to return his bike and that
I should lock it up.
- Parallel: He asked me to return his bike and to
lock it up.
OR
He asked that I return his bike and that
I lock it up.
2. Items to be compared:
- NOT parallel: I like tennis better than to play indoor
games.
- Parallel: I like tennis better than indoor games.
3. Sentence parts separated by
double conjunctions (either...or, neither...nor,
both...and,
not only...but, also
not...nor):
- NOT parallel: I like either football or taking part in
track events.
-
Parallel: I like either football or track events.